Draft 4 and Evaluation

Teacher's feedback:

WWW:

-         Great music

-         Establishing shot

-         Great shots of getting ready - dressed

EBI:

-         Scene of them in the bed – use wider range of shots

-         Close up (extreme) of phone – to see who is calling

-         Editing getting out of bed is quite quick

-         Lipstick scene – closer to the lips (extreme close-up)

-         Maybe do something with the hair?

-         Inconstant sounds in the background – should’ve low music in the background

-         Wider range of shots when she’s walking

-         Voiceover – no diagetic sound in the background – just voiceover with low music

-         Longer shots of photos – in focus

Mark: 41/60

Level: 3


Teachers Evaluation: