Grades

My overall grades for each draft :

Draft 1 - 23/24

Draft 2 - 30

Draft 3 - 31/32

Draft 4 - 41

Progression chart

This chart shows the different ways my group progressed in our preliminary and opening sequence drafts.

	Preliminary	Draft 1	Draft 2	Draft 3	Draft 4	Final Draft
Mark: Level:	N/A	26-27/60 2	30/31 2	31/32 2	41 3
WWW:	Time management	Costume	Variety of shots	Lighting	Camera shots/ angles
EBI:	Camera shot/angle	Lighting	Sound/music completed	Music continuous	Voiceover Music/ sound
Filming/ Editing Target	Camera shots/angle	Lighting	Sound/music	Jump cuts Costume	Voice over Music/ sound
Changes – decisions/ revisions.	N/A	Take away the wine/kitchen scene	Change the road to a busy one	Get the husband involved	Take away the husband scene	What would you have to change? Blurry picture Voiceover

Overall impression and targets

My overall impression of the final draft of the opening sequence is that :
- I think we have improved from the fourth draft and managed time appropriately.
- Put the video in black and white to have the film noir feel but used a phone for a prop to make it more modern. 


Targets :
- Phone scene in focus
- Include more camera movement
- Improve the music or even make my own music with garage band.


Experience:
This course gave me the opportunity to learn how to :
- use the camera, tripod and lights
- imovie editing program
- know more about powerpoint
- learnt to use sites such as blogger and google  
The evaluation help me to look back at my work and see the development from the preliminary to the final draft.

Evaluation

The evaluation was the last thing we had to do. We did some research to be prepared and know what to say, we also included a presentation to help the viewers understand and help us talk about the whole research, planning and production of this course.


Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Actors and location pictures and develpoment

These are the locations that we filmed in.

Target audience research and development

This presentation shows the our groups target audience.

Costume and prop pictures and development

This powerpoint shows the different props and costumes we used and how we developed each draft.