Feedback
WWW :
- good research of film noir, music, videos, fonts, pictures and connotations
- simple story and understandable
- using backup address of URL's
EBI :
- have stills of the videos and labelled
- put the iconography slide in a chart
- identify what we learnt form the questionnaire
- actors/actress slides need to be separate
- bigger fonts and less text on the slides
Need to think about :
- leaving a mystery at the end (close up of gun - last shot)
- flashbacks of lover
- meet more conventions
- lighting
- cigarette (different ways to show smoke)
Overall mark - 13/14
Overall grade - 3
One example of the peer assessment : (By clicking on the images it will enlarge them)
Teacher assessment :
