Draft 3 and Evaluation

Feedback :
· Titles – in the way? – smaller? 
· Title – what is Linda? – seems like character introduction
· Still need closer shots
· Jump shots
· Looking at camera

· More shots of the phone
· Dafne – putting the dress on – strap – back shot
· Stocking – black – over the knee
· Blurry – Dafne – Red lipstick
· Shot for putting the lipstick – too long
· Shot of him whispering she don’t love him – (whisper) more closer
· Music should continue when no dialogue
· More shots of down the street
· Pulling the phone – who is she calling
· Not really an opening sequence – short film

Overall Grade : mid 2
Overall mark : 31-32


Teachers evaluation: