Draft 2 and Evaluation

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Music was good.
The man was more in the shots.
Linda was more seductive than draft 1.


EBI
Match on action.
Outside scene :
               - conversation on the phone with her husband.
Voiceover inconsistent needs to be clearer and the whisper [extreme close up shot]
More varied shots.
Linda needs to be more. 
             - seductive 'bitchy', silk clothing when she gets out of bed. 
             - when she's getting dressed Linda could be sliding her dress on.
Wine glass with lipstick mark.
Linda pulling up stockings make it more seductive.